Monday, 20 March 2017

In writing I have been learning to use basic punctuation that is mostly correct;
- use capital letters, full stops and commas,
- use question marks and exclamation marks,
- use apostrophes,
- use speech marks

I have been especially focusing on using exclamation marks and commas. I have highlighted these in green where I have used them as well as other punctuation that I changed because it was used incorrectly. Here is a piece of my writing that shows this.

One of the leadership traits of being an effective leader is being. Integrity this means i have to make the game fair by knowing the game rules. jak occonal has shown integrity because when he was setting a game up and heaps of people were playing he kept the game really fair because not only did he kept the points to his friends team but the gave it to the team that got the point. Not giving it to one team every time when they didn't get a point. Even though he got bossed around that the game wasn't fair. I had to back up so i am going to try and do what jak integrity is important because the game has got to be fair,fun,and has lots of people involved As well as being fear I also need to be a good ref by having all sorts of good leading .As well as being integrity I also need to be active thinker

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